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Post by ♥ on Jan 12, 2007 17:07:15 GMT -5
I'll tear your soul out through your eyes and, The dagger shall cut deep, I'll rip those wings from you as, Bone shatteres gladd, Crystal falling, Neverending, Unknown in a world of thought, Condmened by me, to you, A kiss of fate, A cobra striking, Over the edge you fall, Torn wings dragging you down, Into oblivion for the deeds you did, As knives take bitter blood, You know longer want, Seeping from your weeping heart, As the coin turns once more and still, The chasm awaits.
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Post by Dizzi on Jan 12, 2007 17:10:46 GMT -5
*clap clap clap* Very good. I'm not going to get all analytical, but very good. And I do appreciate poetry. Just I dno't think I'm very good at writing it (Might write something sooner or later...)
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Post by ♥ on Jan 12, 2007 17:13:23 GMT -5
Nonono, get analytical I love it. ^_^
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