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Post by angelwing on Mar 18, 2007 12:16:45 GMT -5
Take a doubtful step forward, child thou art full of fear, a demon rages wild inside, trapped and frustrated within its tide, hell's beloved fallen, cascade down, to a forever bleeding earth, search for the one you love.
There are many roads to follow, better left tomorrow, still i must go without a word, other memories that still hurt, deluded and broken, in every eternity.
Falling snow, the shining sun, stormy clouds, the cheerful one, step by step, i must hop, every step, i must go, rattle rattle, tap tap, this is how i love to dance, another bright day, born from the rising sun, i've got all that i need right here, with me, my dearest friends, open up to me.
These are my poems i did to go with Me, Balor and Minetta's characters, Malin, Yori and Ruth. The first one is Malin's, he's searching for his sister, scared and he has a wild demon inside of him making him go in a rage and he gets easily angry. >.<
The second one is Yori's, he had a bad past when he argued with his family and left them and when his friend was murdered. He's also cold and thinks hes better than everyone else, which he is, in fighting says Balor. 0_o Yori is just awesome and ignorant.
The last one is Ruth's, she's a total goody goody, always happy and dancing and singing. Later on when she meets Malin and Yori she wants Yori to open up to her a bit more and she wants them all to be friends, which won't happen because Malin and Yori tend to fight a lot. ^_^ And she's a real cutie.
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Post by ♥ on Mar 18, 2007 12:32:14 GMT -5
Wowee!
Loveloveloveloveloooovuh!
Hmm, I'm in the mood for freeverse....
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Post by angelwing on Mar 18, 2007 12:43:04 GMT -5
I don't think they are that good. >_< You're done better ones Schemmie but thankies!
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Post by minetta on Mar 18, 2007 16:57:46 GMT -5
OMG Thank you Angie! Thats like totally a Ruth poem!!! ;D Dancing and hopping around, hee and she's a cutie too like you said.
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Post by angelwing on Mar 18, 2007 17:05:14 GMT -5
Thats hey okay, im glad you like Ruth's poem but i bet Balor will think his is not a lot like Yori because he's ignorant just like him.
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Darigan
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Post by Darigan on Mar 27, 2007 17:36:00 GMT -5
Wow!
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Post by angelwing on Mar 30, 2007 11:01:42 GMT -5
Hee, they are not that amazing! But thank you! ;D
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Darigan
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Post by Darigan on Mar 31, 2007 9:27:07 GMT -5
It's wonderful ^^ much better than mine....
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Post by angelwing on Apr 1, 2007 13:54:30 GMT -5
If i could read your poems i'm sure their good too.
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Darigan
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Post by Darigan on Apr 1, 2007 17:05:55 GMT -5
You can if you want! I'll post a few old ones and try to update my deviant to put up new ones...
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