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Post by Dizzi on Jan 15, 2007 19:40:46 GMT -5
Hey everyone. I've had this poem in my head for awhile, and decided to put it here. Just a little one. It's not depressing etc. but...the meaning, to me, has alot. This is my first poem in near four years.
Snowflakes
The snowflakes are drifting with the wind following the same path, melting to oblivion when they hit the wet, cold ground But, if you look closely, you can see that they are different
some join together some drift alone some land on the grass and survive creating a snowbank
But they still all drift off from their planned paths from the clouds. the wind carries one and the rest follow
But if you look closely you can see some straying from the mainstream
Hoping to get through their miserable lives and become something important
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I hope you like it....
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Post by The Seventh Starr on Jan 15, 2007 20:10:26 GMT -5
this is cool Dizzzzzzzzie
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Post by ♥ on Jan 16, 2007 8:44:05 GMT -5
Wow, deep. It seems like you are using the snow as a metaphor fro humaity?
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Post by Dizzi on Jan 16, 2007 11:16:37 GMT -5
yep!
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Post by ♥ on Jan 16, 2007 16:38:11 GMT -5
If this were DA I'd fave it.
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Post by Dizzi on Jan 16, 2007 16:43:34 GMT -5
My mom is having me show it to my english teacher XD
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Post by ♥ on Jan 16, 2007 16:44:26 GMT -5
I never show my mum ANYTHING. 0.0
She likes a year old poem once that I found absolute shiz. I;m gunna rewrite it for her, show her that, see if she lieks it.
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